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The Bottom (Original Poem written by Briana Derry)

Written by: Briana Derry, MBA

Pure transparency. This is an original poem I wrote about a current life situation. Pray for me, and share your thoughts. You are not your mistakes.

The Bottom

I have felt myself , for a long time, sinking

“I can beat my mind”, is what I kept thinking

Depression, grief, anxiety – all so dreadful

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Therapy, family, all so helpful

Screamed for help, but not loud enough

She’s resillient, she’s educated, She’s tough

Until the bottom, I had to sit

A pole, I hit

Injuries, regret and a first offense

What is happening? I am not this dense

I am the example, I know what to do

But human I am, too

You are not your mistakes, don’t stop

If you ever hit the bottom, keep your eyes up to the top

5 responses to “The Bottom (Original Poem written by Briana Derry)”

  1. Serena Avatar
    Serena

    This was an awesome poem!! I loved it! Whatever you are going through, keep your head up!

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    1. BreeziDeezi© Avatar
      BreeziDeezi©

      You are a published poet so that means a lot to me. I would love a poem from you on BreeziDeezi.com. & Yes, I will stay encouraged.

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  2. ninjastrategy2 Avatar
    ninjastrategy2

    Hello there..
    Wow, what a beautiful poem! I love the imagery and the emotions it evokes. Keep up the great work, Briana!
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  3. angelicawilliams76 Avatar
    angelicawilliams76

    Wonderful, vulnerable, and honest. Great poem, Bri. Sending you all my love as always.

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    1. BreeziDeezi© Avatar
      BreeziDeezi©

      That means so much from a great writer as yourself. ❤ Thank you.

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